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Disappear

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 Mar 2003 · 4 comments

I want to disappear Never to reappear. Without you be my I can not see The days go by you and me. You were here before you left so fast Now the days just pass and pass. Why did i have to be so selfish? You cried for help and i didn't listen my ears were blind to your faint cries. I should of known better than to listen to you Now your in front of my cold and blue. As i look at your lifeless body i wonder, Is that the sound of thunder? As the rain pours down my gentle face I think of why you are in this place? When they cover you with a big white sheet I should of known when we would last meet. I pray to god that you come back soon On a rainy day like today or when its a full moon.

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4 comments

[n/a] <~> 26-Mar-03/8:36 AM Reply
you really should of known.
hahahaha!!!!!!!!
white sheet.
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
[0] razorgrin 26-Mar-03/9:42 AM Reply
That about sums it up, z.
[0] horus8 8-May-03/2:24 PM Reply
I pray to Lucifuge that you FUCKING DIE, so go to it. Tail drop off of the grand canyon aqnd 50 50 grind on a bald eagle on the way down.
[5] ==Doylum 4-Sep-03/2:38 PM Reply
I spy wiv my lituwl eye that my favorite line begiiiiins wiiiiith
my ears were blind

which you pinched from Monty
You terrible cunt