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Disappear (Free verse) by sk8boardandpoems
I want to disappear Never to reappear. Without you be my I can not see The days go by you and me. You were here before you left so fast Now the days just pass and pass. Why did i have to be so selfish? You cried for help and i didn't listen my ears were blind to your faint cries. I should of known better than to listen to you Now your in front of my cold and blue. As i look at your lifeless body i wonder, Is that the sound of thunder? As the rain pours down my gentle face I think of why you are in this place? When they cover you with a big white sheet I should of known when we would last meet. I pray to god that you come back soon On a rainy day like today or when its a full moon.

Up the ladder: immaculate perception
Down the ladder: Tin Can Longings

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3846154
Weighted score: 3.8190591
Overall Rank: 13487
Posted: March 7, 2003 1:50 PM PST; Last modified: March 7, 2003 1:50 PM PST
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[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 26-Mar-03/8:36 AM | Reply
you really should of known.
hahahaha!!!!!!!!
white sheet.
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.106 | 26-Mar-03/9:42 AM | Reply
That about sums it up, z.
[0] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 8-May-03/2:24 PM | Reply
I pray to Lucifuge that you FUCKING DIE, so go to it. Tail drop off of the grand canyon aqnd 50 50 grind on a bald eagle on the way down.
[5] ==Doylum @ 80.225.178.201 | 4-Sep-03/2:38 PM | Reply
I spy wiv my lituwl eye that my favorite line begiiiiins wiiiiith
my ears were blind

which you pinched from Monty
You terrible cunt
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