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Disappear (Free verse) by sk8boardandpoems

I want to disappear Never to reappear. Without you be my I can not see The days go by you and me. You were here before you left so fast Now the days just pass and pass. Why did i have to be so selfish? You cried for help and i didn't listen my ears were blind to your faint cries. I should of known better than to listen to you Now your in front of my cold and blue. As i look at your lifeless body i wonder, Is that the sound of thunder? As the rain pours down my gentle face I think of why you are in this place? When they cover you with a big white sheet I should of known when we would last meet. I pray to god that you come back soon On a rainy day like today or when its a full moon.

==Doylum 4-Sep-03/2:38 PM
I spy wiv my lituwl eye that my favorite line begiiiiins wiiiiith
my ears were blind

which you pinched from Monty
You terrible cunt




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