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breathe on me? (Free verse) by emilyowey Will you breathe on me?
Will you give some of that life that I long
for?
Could you share it?
I see you stand so strong, so firm.
I wish that that was in me.
I lay here prostrate, on the floor,
Trying to find some of you.
Breathe on me.
Look at me.
Let me see your face.
Your eyes could lift me,
Hands could hold me.
Please just look my way?
Up the ladder:
Februarys mother
Down the ladder:
Junior Trees
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Posted: February 6, 2003 11:47 AM PST; Last modified: February 6, 2003 11:47 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.302559 Overall Rank: 3668 Comments:
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Shardik @ 24.126.113.154
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6-Feb-03/6:04 PM
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Grrrrrrr.
i'm sorry, but this makes you look pathetic. have some self-respect, child!
My fav on this site. I love it.
My fav on this site. I love it.
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