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breathe on me? (Free verse) by emilyowey

Will you breathe on me? Will you give some of that life that I long for? Could you share it? I see you stand so strong, so firm. I wish that that was in me. I lay here prostrate, on the floor, Trying to find some of you. Breathe on me. Look at me. Let me see your face. Your eyes could lift me, Hands could hold me. Please just look my way?

SMP 29-Oct-12/10:27 PM
My fav on this site. I love it.




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