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6:02 (Free verse) by corinacorrie
From realms of dreams
Vivid and peaceful
The sudden cold reality hits
Tearing down the hopes
Of my night?s schemes
Tear from the cocoon
Frail and unprotected
The grey morning sky
Sends melancholy messages
Of my doom
Start the process over
Can I fake one more day?
A blank stare into a cloudy mirror
Will I see it to the end?
Die in the others fervor?
Step into the cold
Exposed and anew
Eastern impending daybreak
Pushes me further
Into suffering untold
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7257
Posted: February 6, 2003 3:05 PM PST; Last modified: February 6, 2003 3:05 PM PST
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