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75%! (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
The nerve of them taking the dough from the bread
if I had my desire I'd paint with her head
cleanly severed and beautified
like the silence in a wake
leaving room for error
your final mistake
But chaos leaves nothing, and no one, nowhere
if you had it your way we would rest right there
never progressing,de- stressing, immutable
the lines of the canvas forever refutable
we are poison injected into their hearts
sometimes it makes it so hard to start..
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4659
Posted: February 14, 2003 4:01 PM PST; Last modified: February 14, 2003 4:01 PM PST
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