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75%! (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
The nerve of them taking the dough from the bread if I had my desire I'd paint with her head cleanly severed and beautified like the silence in a wake leaving room for error your final mistake But chaos leaves nothing, and no one, nowhere if you had it your way we would rest right there never progressing,de- stressing, immutable the lines of the canvas forever refutable we are poison injected into their hearts sometimes it makes it so hard to start..

Up the ladder: Lianne
Down the ladder: Lately

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4659
Posted: February 14, 2003 4:01 PM PST; Last modified: February 14, 2003 4:01 PM PST
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[9] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Feb-03/4:08 PM | Reply
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[9] deleted user @ 66.93.78.246 | 15-Feb-03/11:51 AM | Reply
great single images, but not sure they tie together smoothly. Maybe that kind of fractured view is what you were after though.
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