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Lianne (Other) by mindsigns
Lianne... the flowers died today a soldier walks alone a smile lodestone Lianne... the pillow's on the floor there is nothing in the air the Diaster's under there it's a complicated thing to see putting faces on disease Come Home Lianne... the dim light between peace and war your story is not spoken the futile turmoil soaking Lianne... what a lovely page it was created in the evening absolute grieving it's a complicated thing to see putting faces on disease Lianne,come home....

Up the ladder: Into the Deep
Down the ladder: 75%!

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4658
Posted: January 16, 2003 5:21 AM PST; Last modified: January 16, 2003 5:21 AM PST
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[8] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 16-Jan-03/9:04 AM | Reply
damn. that is some kind of keening.
kudos, mindsigns
[n/a] mindsigns @ 64.12.96.234 > <~> | 18-Jan-03/6:46 AM | Reply
Thanks, I appreciate it
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