Re: Ghost of Gloaming by Don-Quixote	7-Oct-03/10:21 PM
A dastardly piece of factual trivia, bravo. 10.
Re: a comment on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>	3-Oct-03/3:02 PM
No thanks, I have lot's of big windows, and a lovely backyard. Plus I am at work, well, I have to do a movie at the end of the month and play a show at the bigfoot lodge, but other than that this is what I do currently, I'm at my desk, in my beautifully well lit (naturally, of course) Den/Frontroom finishing up my book and writing two movies. One for Carlos Diegus and one for this flaming filipino friend of mine. Therefore, forgive me if I cackle at you and say "Lick my scrotum freak!"
Re: Under Blood Oak by horus8	3-Oct-03/2:18 PM
A sad bitter leif Garret
Re: Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>	3-Oct-03/2:17 PM
I most often make myself laugh the hardest.
Re: a comment on I am Jack's Black magic, dude. by Shardik	1-Oct-03/4:28 PM
ha ha ha ha, yeah, well, atleast I have the guts not to delete mine. ::AGIANTYAWN/SIGH::
Re: a comment on Death, last resort of protection by TheVoiceless	30-Sep-03/7:29 PM
God, did that ever hit home with me. lol
Re: a comment on I am Jack's Black magic, dude. by Shardik	30-Sep-03/6:25 PM
An appocalypse now poster, by a very famous Japanese artist.
Re: Deceit by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	30-Sep-03/5:13 PM
I simply adore the way you blatantly ponder the relevance in defining style. That, and my honey fetish allowed me to vote high for this regardless of the style spanking pieces.
Re: a comment on Pin worms and cake. by baphomet	29-Sep-03/5:32 PM
no im in the 6th. asshole. who asked for your opion. anal bead.
Re: Junk by Bonehiss	22-Sep-03/6:33 PM
A lovely consideration.
Re: Spider Meth Adventure by Y2kSlamPoet	20-Sep-03/12:29 PM
Don't take his anti drug propaganda to heart young one. Even Ashcroft likes a cocaine enima once in a while. the problem with dark angel and drugs is simple, notice. Wheelchair no sexlife __________ X ____________ = A BAD TRIP constipation Mechanical charisma Could you imagine? Da, (in mechanical voice tripping balls) -- Waht are you staring at? 7-11 guy -- (hindu voice) pardon me please? Da-- I said what are you staring at towel head, quit looking at me like you want to buff my spokes, or clean my trachianomy tube vishnu, DAMN YOU. (he hits the button to activate his evacuation harness) Hindu #2 -- That gross fucking mechanical dolly enbrowned my freshly waxed an sealed linoleum. I hate 4x4 with harnesses an angels, especially when they are stoned.
Re: Janine (a set of haikus) by capachijim	20-Sep-03/11:57 AM
It's good, but it aint that good. 7.
Re: The Uraeus (title by horus) by Y2kSlamPoet	20-Sep-03/11:52 AM
Nicely done.
Re: a comment on The Shu & Horus & Planet X by Shardik	20-Sep-03/11:34 AM
Next time, put it in "" from the beginning, otherwise, it looks just like the word 'inconceivable'. Or incrucible starring a red flyer agon and a pair of long johns.
Re: MicroPoem by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	20-Sep-03/12:46 AM
Rad.
Re: a comment on The Shu & Horus & Planet X by Shardik	20-Sep-03/12:38 AM
You do not think so? That Aliens messed with our dna to make us hybrids to work harder, better and live longer?
Re: Boys with Guns by Hostileintent	19-Sep-03/5:08 PM
[_] AABB rhyming scheme [_] About romantic love [_] About poetry-writing [_] About suicide or self-mutilation [_] Arbitrary indentation [x] Arbitrary line breaks [_] Autobiographical but in the third person [_] Clerical errors [x] Cliched imagery (staring out of window, pits of despair) [_] Cliched rhymes (love/above etc.) [x] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments [x] Devoid of rhyme [_] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices [_] Devoid of wond'rous or fantastical imagery [_] Drug references [_] Elves, unicorns, etc. [_] Exclamation points used to mark 'the funny bits' [_] Insipidly whimsical or zany [_] Leaving rant [_] Lower case only [x] Melodramatic [_] Naively religious or superstitious [_] Obsessed with femininity [_] Overabundance of ellipses [x] Overuse of 'depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness, etc) [x] Pointedly unanswered questions [_] Protagonist has a smug name [_] Rage against the machine [_] References to the author's 'social life' [x] Repetition of a single word or phrase to the point of nausea [x] Sanctimoniously moral [_] Sentimental [_] Self-pity [_] Thesaurophilia [_] Use of internet shorthand or emoticons [x] Vicarious wish fulfilment SPA
Re: Thunderbird and Maledict by Don-Quixote	19-Sep-03/5:04 PM
[_] AABB rhyming scheme [_] About romantic love [_] About poetry-writing [X_] About suicide or self-mutilation [X_] Arbitrary indentation [X_] Arbitrary line breaks [X_] Autobiographical but in the third person [X_] Clerical errors [_] Cliched imagery (staring out of window, pits of despair) [_] Cliched rhymes (love/above etc.) [_] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments [X_] Devoid of rhyme [X_] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices [_] Devoid of wond'rous or fantastical imagery [_] Drug references [_] Elves, unicorns, etc. [_] Exclamation points used to mark 'the funny bits' [_] Insipidly whimsical or zany [_] Leaving rant [_] Lower case only [X_] Melodramatic [_] Naively religious or superstitious [_] Obsessed with femininity [_] Overabundance of ellipses [_] Overuse of 'depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness, etc) [X] Pointedly unanswered questions [_] Protagonist has a smug name [_] Rage against the machine [_] References to the author's 'social life' [_] Repetition of a single word or phrase to the point of nausea [X_] Sanctimoniously moral [X_] Sentimental [X_] Self-pity [_] Thesaurophilia [_] Use of internet shorthand or emoticons [_] Vicarious wish fulfilment SPA
Re: a comment on The Shu & Horus & Planet X by Shardik	19-Sep-03/5:00 PM
Literally, on Atlantis.
Re: a comment on reflexion v.3 - Cannibalization and Twilight by Don-Quixote	19-Sep-03/4:56 PM
[X] Thesaurophilia ha ha haaaaaa woah ah haa ha ha hee he.