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The Uraeus (title by horus) (Free verse) by Y2kSlamPoet no need to read
he said
-how so?-
I thought of it
before that fool
endowed with pen
had the idea
to rape it
with words
that are like you
and me:
they change
grow old
and die
Up the ladder:
A Night's Treaty
Down the ladder:
a rapid expenditure
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Posted: September 20, 2003 1:39 AM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2003 1:39 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.089402 Overall Rank: 6271 Comments:
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Y2kSlamPoet @ 204.31.160.96
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20-Sep-03/1:40 AM
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Thanks horus, i hated the original title.. i was sucked dry of ideas at the time.
Crowned with a beautiful title.
Cobra-browed and rocking..
Nicely done.
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