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Haiku № 65669

Oedipus' last glass of bubbles

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Sep 2003 · Edited 18 Sep 2003 · 4 comments

She squats over it And then, of course, so do I... Incestola pop

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4 comments

[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 18-Sep-03/8:34 PM Reply
What really amazes me about poemranker is: that this absolute shrine of a haiku is being avoid as far as votes go... yet it's the most read? That's The Jew factor people making you nosey yet weak. you disgust me. You make me all want to eat your three legged vulvas.
[10] deleted user 18-Sep-03/9:54 PM Reply
It's being avoided because although it's a shrine of a Haiku it's too close to home for most of the 'poets' that need a raping..err..ranking on this site. and it doesn't rhyme....for which I whip out my dink and whizz warm thunder on it. (11)
[n/a] Shardik › deleted user 19-Sep-03/2:59 PM Reply
Haikus don't usually rhyme, but i go both ways, but vilanelles do, and I love writing vilanelles and Sonnets and Sestinas, how about you? have you written anything out of your normal comfort zone of freeverse? If not? do, you'll love it. It's a great way to stretch the form, and your creative juices.
[10] deleted user › Shardik 19-Sep-03/3:18 PM Reply
I have never read a haiku that rhymed. yet. I wrote one today. it didn't rhyme.

My comfort zone...yes..my comfort zone. I will try. if you'll forgive me later when I get pissed again and rage all night for rhyming anything.

frickin vilanelles. Shmuel has to look up the word vilanelle to even attempt it. damn...blast.