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MicroPoem (Free verse) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
Deformity.

Down the ladder: Why Should I Care

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.5
Overall Rank: 12814
Posted: September 19, 2003 5:12 PM PDT; Last modified: September 19, 2003 5:12 PM PDT
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[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.71 | 19-Sep-03/5:13 PM | Reply
The idea behind this poem was to condense all my feelings into a single word, and thus create a poem which has the maximum possible concentration of emotion.
[8] Y2kSlamPoet @ 204.31.162.82 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 19-Sep-03/5:27 PM | Reply
you could have done better.. made it smaller..

ex: shit, fuck, or: ASS! etc.

but ill give you an 8 anyway.
[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.71 > Y2kSlamPoet | 22-Sep-03/5:45 PM | Reply
I have no emotions about my ASS. As for "shit" and "Fuck", there are far too many "poets" who swear for absolutely no reason on this "site".
[0] deleted user @ 209.234.157.106 | 19-Sep-03/5:18 PM | Reply
My God! Why didn't I think of something that profound!
[8] Y2kSlamPoet @ 204.31.162.82 > deleted user | 19-Sep-03/5:26 PM | Reply
well.. im not sure about profound, but its fucking funny.

sure beats the other one he made lmao.
[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.71 > deleted user | 19-Sep-03/5:31 PM | Reply
You are but young.
[8] Y2kSlamPoet @ 204.31.162.82 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 19-Sep-03/5:49 PM | Reply
actually.. shes old.. bipolar and mentally challenged aswell.
[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 19-Sep-03/5:28 PM | Reply
Ten-Two for the extra talkin'.
[9] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Sep-03/12:46 AM | Reply
Rad.
[9] Garrett S Sexton @ 213.122.76.112 | 20-Sep-03/1:08 AM | Reply
LAZY, CRASS NAZI PROPAGANDA.
Not what I expected, but a good shock-thinker of a poem. 9
[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.208 | 24-Sep-03/5:26 PM | Reply
So far this poem has a comments-to-poetry ratio of about 80:1 (not including my own comments, obviously). Is this a record? Why is there no table ranking this statistic?
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