MicroPoem

by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Sep 2003 · 11 comments

Deformity.

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[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 19-Sep-03/5:13 PM Reply

The idea behind this poem was to condense all my feelings into a single word, and thus create a poem which has the maximum possible concentration of emotion.

[8] Y2kSlamPoet › ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 19-Sep-03/5:27 PM Reply

you could have done better.. made it smaller..

ex: shit, fuck, or: ASS! etc.

but ill give you an 8 anyway.

[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? › Y2kSlamPoet 22-Sep-03/5:45 PM Reply

I have no emotions about my ASS. As for "shit" and "Fuck", there are far too many "poets" who swear for absolutely no reason on this "site".

[0] deleted user 19-Sep-03/5:18 PM Reply

My God! Why didn't I think of something that profound!

[8] Y2kSlamPoet › deleted user 19-Sep-03/5:26 PM Reply

well.. im not sure about profound, but its fucking funny.

sure beats the other one he made lmao.

[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? › deleted user 19-Sep-03/5:31 PM Reply

You are but young.

[8] Y2kSlamPoet › ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 19-Sep-03/5:49 PM Reply

actually.. shes old.. bipolar and mentally challenged aswell.

[n/a] deleted user 19-Sep-03/5:28 PM Reply

Ten-Two for the extra talkin'.

[9] Shardik 20-Sep-03/12:46 AM Reply

Rad.

[9] Garrett S Sexton 20-Sep-03/1:08 AM Reply

LAZY, CRASS NAZI PROPAGANDA.
Not what I expected, but a good shock-thinker of a poem. 9

[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 24-Sep-03/5:26 PM Reply

So far this poem has a comments-to-poetry ratio of about 80:1 (not including my own comments, obviously). Is this a record? Why is there no table ranking this statistic?