poemranker ::Death, last resort of protection by TheVoiceless

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Free verse № 67565

Death, last resort of protection

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 Sep 2003 · 5 comments

Lay here dying can’t you see, Breathe not drawling correctly, Better call a doctor to inspect me, Call the Coroner he won’t reject me, Just tag my toe and haul me off, Lower me deep beneath the soil, For there I will finally have protection, No longer to be harmed or worry of the evil that lives.

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[n/a] deleted user 30-Sep-03/3:22 PM Reply
You lie.
[n/a] TheVoiceless › deleted user 30-Sep-03/3:46 PM Reply
Why thank you kind sir.
[3] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 30-Sep-03/5:21 PM Reply
I found this by searching for "gargantuan jelly" on Google: http://www.unicornjelly.com/dndky.html
[n/a] Shardik › ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 30-Sep-03/7:29 PM Reply
God, did that ever hit home with me. lol
[1] Stephen Robins 28-Jun-04/6:15 AM Reply
The most terrible congealed piece of phlegm ever to have been laid down under the guise of "poetry".