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Death, last resort of protection (Free verse) by TheVoiceless
Lay here dying can’t you see, Breathe not drawling correctly, Better call a doctor to inspect me, Call the Coroner he won’t reject me, Just tag my toe and haul me off, Lower me deep beneath the soil, For there I will finally have protection, No longer to be harmed or worry of the evil that lives.

Up the ladder: Psypher the new coming
Down the ladder: My addict

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10862
Posted: September 30, 2003 12:44 PM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2003 12:44 PM PDT
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[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 30-Sep-03/3:22 PM | Reply
You lie.
[n/a] TheVoiceless @ 216.248.118.201 > deleted user | 30-Sep-03/3:46 PM | Reply
Why thank you kind sir.
[3] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.70 | 30-Sep-03/5:21 PM | Reply
I found this by searching for "gargantuan jelly" on Google: http://www.unicornjelly.com/dndky.html
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 30-Sep-03/7:29 PM | Reply
God, did that ever hit home with me. lol
[1] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 28-Jun-04/6:15 AM | Reply
The most terrible congealed piece of phlegm ever to have been laid down under the guise of "poetry".
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