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ONCE(revised)

Member since 2004 · Posted 22 Sep 2004 · 1 comment

Once I had a heart so true. But know It's gone from me two you. So keep my heart as I have done. For you have two and I have none. Without my heart my life is done. I guess my dear you've finally won. be gentle and be kind, dont ever leave this heart behind. Hearts are beautiful, and they are rare, thats why people hate to share. dont let my heart get to much pain. broken hearts are hard to explain. Now It's time to say goodbye. wipe those tears upon your eye. If we born we must die,and I dont know the reason why.

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[1] horus8 22-Sep-04/3:54 PM Reply
A quartered pine nut.