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The temple of Dissaray (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld
These walls are musty, yet glittered stone
The temple glows dark, yet still Iâm home
Theirs no fire to led the way
Theirs no light to see my escape
We run from the danger as it comes are way
For why does it seem that Iâm not going anywhere?
Where I want to be, Somehow Iâm never their
Pain Inflicted by misery, torture, and Despair
Captured by a thief
My screams are never heard
A relapse from the past takes place
When the walls are closing in, were losing space
To breathe, to run or to hide
To live a lost life
No one knows the trouble youâve felt, the trouble Iâve felt
The trouble we feel, on day alas
Are troubles will be surpassed
We will be together with love at last
For I thought are day would never come
But somehow we were victor, beating out everyone
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10869
Posted: April 20, 2005 9:52 PM PDT; Last modified: April 20, 2005 10:26 PM PDT
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