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thanks for shutting up (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
Half a lip
is still enough
to run off too much at the mouth.
A tactless quip
is cause enough
to run you right out of town.
But I thought you rather comical,
though you tore my ego in strips.
I squelched my pride
and clenched my fist
before you forcefully pinched your lips.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10875
Posted: March 7, 2006 1:08 AM PST; Last modified: March 7, 2006 1:08 AM PST
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