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thanks for shutting up

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 Mar 2006 · 1 comment

Half a lip is still enough to run off too much at the mouth. A tactless quip is cause enough to run you right out of town. But I thought you rather comical, though you tore my ego in strips. I squelched my pride and clenched my fist before you forcefully pinched your lips.

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[6] Dovina 7-Mar-06/12:14 PM Reply
Great title.