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thanks for shutting up (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation Half a lip
is still enough
to run off too much at the mouth.
A tactless quip
is cause enough
to run you right out of town.
But I thought you rather comical,
though you tore my ego in strips.
I squelched my pride
and clenched my fist
before you forcefully pinched your lips.
Up the ladder:
The Riddle
Down the ladder:
The taste of something new.
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Posted: March 7, 2006 1:08 AM PST; Last modified: March 7, 2006 1:08 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8211956 Overall Rank: 10884 Comments:
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Dovina @ 69.175.32.104
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7-Mar-06/12:14 PM
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Great title.
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