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Unless

Member since 2005 · Posted 8 Feb 2006 · 2 comments

Those days I prayed, sitting alone in my bedroom thinking of you, not really you but what you respresent, the image of a wife, a woman to hold, someone to pass the time with, someone with interest similar to mine, ten years has passed, now your my lady, I hold you close, wish you the best with your day, I care for you, I see it all cleary now, my blessing, my dreams of ole, now I live those dreams through you, and inside you I find enough pleasure for one, therefore I'll always come home, I'll always call, I'll always love you, unless

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[4] wilco 9-Feb-06/3:39 PM Reply
Some nice sentiments, but not a very entertaining read unless you're the one at which it's directed.
[6] Glasseyez 11-Feb-06/10:15 PM Reply
nice poem but i agree with wilco