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Deceit (Sonnet) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
Hello friendly Bee! Buzz, Buzz, Buzz, Bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzz zzzzzz zzz zz zz z z z z z z z z z zz z z z z zz zzz zzz zz z z zz zzzz zzzzzz zz z z z z z z z Grak! You stung me in the eye!
Up the ladder: Wha you funkin wan?
Down the ladder: Love
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.7777777
Weighted score: 4.888889
Overall Rank: 9908
Posted: September 30, 2003 4:54 PM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2003 4:54 PM PDT
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[8] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 30-Sep-03/5:13 PM | Reply
I simply adore the way you blatantly ponder the relevance in defining style. That, and my honey fetish allowed me to vote high for this regardless of the style spanking pieces.
[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.70 > Shardik | 30-Sep-03/5:19 PM | Reply
I don't even understand what that first sentence means. I accept your praise graciously nonetheless.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 1-Oct-03/12:11 PM | Reply
Precisely.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 1-Oct-03/12:12 PM | Reply
I am 5 different personas.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 2-Oct-03/1:59 PM | Reply
Horus8, is half demon and likes singing and Metaphysics and is highly intelligent. Elitist, radical. Leader and quite an adept practicer of the forbiden arts.

Bachus,is an ass, loves playing various instruments and drinking, whoring, and pretty much what his name entails.

<{Baba^Yaga{>, is more of the botanist bitch in me, my androgenus side, and she is heartless and quite cruel, nost of the time.

Shardik, loves nature and fighting and guy shit and being alone. Reading a lot and soul searching, painting, sculpting.

Jeremi B. Handrinos, is me when the others aren't hogging up all of the good shit, I'm a dad an actor ah more social and an all around Leo (egoless though which is rare) giving protector of the light.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 > horus8 | 2-Oct-03/10:59 PM | Reply
You have never displayed any difference between any of your 'personas'. Furthermore, Sir, if you have ever read an Metaphysical Treatise then I am a turbo jew. Good day.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 2-Oct-03/11:32 PM | Reply
You are just jealous because chrystal's showing me 'love', and not YOU, by the way, you are a turbo Jew. In my opinion, anyway, unless you've found a treatise in a cave yourself deep in Mesopotamia or the jungles of central or south america, it's a crock of shit written by an egomaniacle crock of shit, you daft limp butternutted squash.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 2-Oct-03/2:01 PM | Reply
You'll have to excuse my lack of current sophistication. I'm drunk, already.
[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.69 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 1-Oct-03/2:43 PM | Reply
Practically all my poems are sonnets.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 2-Oct-03/11:34 PM | Reply
yes, that's why I thoroughly enjoy them (when i don't hate you).
[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 163.1.234.241 > horus8 | 6-Oct-03/5:01 AM | Reply
Which of your personas hate me?
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