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Love

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 Oct 2003 · 11 comments

Making love to grow a child Starts out by just a kiss When two peoples heart's Grow twice their size And rainbows cloud the sky Two hours of passion 9 months of love And years of tenderness Making all of life a single moment That began with just a kiss

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[6] god'swife 29-Oct-03/11:36 AM Reply

It's two people's hearts.

Sweet as pie. Unfortunately the rainbows send this zooming to Over-The-Top Ville. Again, my first impression was just kind of ahhhhhh... that's gentle + tender, and I'm all for that sort of thing. Does it really make 'all of life a single moment'?

[7] richa 29-Oct-03/12:07 PM Reply

'Making love to grow a child' is a rather interesting line, seems so unsentimental.

Then 'two peoples hearts grow twice the size' is unabashedly OTT romantic.

Two nice lines but somewhat at odds I think.

The bit about life a single moment is a bit trite, what comes before it does not convince.

[6] Bachus 29-Oct-03/3:16 PM Reply

Peoples' hearts.

Otherwise, horribly treacherous and self centered. lol

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 29-Oct-03/3:19 PM Reply

Excellent. Simply excellent. Hi, I'm -=Dark_Angel=-. I wonder if I could use this piece to help give feeling to a Stephen Hawking memorial Hallowe'en Extravaganza I'm throwing on Friday?

[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 29-Oct-03/5:39 PM Reply

When is this wondrous extravaganza? I am a staunch supporter of Stephen Hawkings and all that he stands for.

[n/a] ==Doylum › ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 29-Oct-03/5:53 PM Reply

oh how ironic!

[n/a] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? › ==Doylum 29-Oct-03/5:58 PM Reply

I don't care for your attitude.

[n/a] ==Doylum › ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 29-Oct-03/6:49 PM Reply

I don't care for your fat head. Fat head

[n/a] ==Doylum 29-Oct-03/7:04 PM Reply

Two hours of passion my fats hairy dangleberried arse. Anyone who claims to last more than 2 minutes 12 seconds is either a malicious mellifluous mendaciant, and or a blond haired worbelling geordie tosser.

Otherwise this is second to none!"

[6] Wobble McFly 30-Oct-03/1:40 AM Reply

Making love to a child
Starts out by just a kiss

I'm not sure I approve of your pederastic activities, sir!!!!!!

[6] fair12 30-Oct-03/11:12 AM Reply

This was very sweet - Naive, but sweet. Unless you've lived through a 4 year old whom you have to chase through a store - you've no idea - and the sweet sentimentality doesn't last...

As for Doylum's comments - if you're only lasting 2 min 12 sec. or bangin someone who does - they've drugs for that now - you may want to check into it...