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Love (Free verse) by EouSou

Making love to grow a child Starts out by just a kiss When two peoples heart's Grow twice their size And rainbows cloud the sky Two hours of passion 9 months of love And years of tenderness Making all of life a single moment That began with just a kiss

god'swife 29-Oct-03/11:36 AM
It's two people's hearts.

Sweet as pie. Unfortunately the rainbows send this zooming to Over-The-Top Ville. Again, my first impression was just kind of ahhhhhh... that's gentle + tender, and I'm all for that sort of thing. Does it really make 'all of life a single moment'?




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