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Life is feudal (Free verse) by anatheman A painted muse
Doused with lies
Follow you down
The road ends and life begins
For those that cry
For the lost minds
Bending to what you say
Leaving a painful mark
I didn?t want this to come
Fear led me away from this
Love led me closer to miss
Your body is left on me
My memory fades, as the lights get brighter
You disappear as I look away?
Up the ladder:
Love
Down the ladder:
futile existence
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Posted: May 10, 2002 11:38 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 11:38 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8875294 Overall Rank: 9910 Comments:
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10-May-02/12:12 PM
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Feudal? As in the political organization of Medieval Europe? Wow. This makes no sense.
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