poemranker ::Life is feudal by anatheman

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Free verse № 1333

Life is feudal

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 1 comment

A painted muse Doused with lies Follow you down The road ends and life begins For those that cry For the lost minds Bending to what you say Leaving a painful mark I didn?t want this to come Fear led me away from this Love led me closer to miss Your body is left on me My memory fades, as the lights get brighter You disappear as I look away?

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[6] anonymous 10-May-02/12:12 PM Reply
Feudal? As in the political organization of Medieval Europe? Wow. This makes no sense.