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futile existence (Haiku) by chinstrap
stuck on a toilette an entire existence is devoted to poop
Up the ladder: Life is feudal
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8461537
Weighted score: 4.8875294
Overall Rank: 9916
Posted: October 23, 2002 2:02 AM PDT; Last modified: October 23, 2002 2:02 AM PDT
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[1] Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.100 | 23-Oct-02/6:12 AM | Reply
-=Dark_Angel=- may like it, but all in all, he's much better at it than you are.
[0] god'swife @ 209.179.135.164 | 23-Oct-02/7:47 AM | Reply
Try a McVities Chocolate Digestive. Their super!
[10] marvelis @ 152.163.188.72 | 20-Dec-02/3:06 PM | Reply
funny and works
[10] Crakyamuni @ 199.101.15.183 | 26-Dec-02/1:23 PM | Reply
It brings a whole new meaning to enlightenment
[5] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 26-Dec-02/1:30 PM | Reply
tsk. tsk. i was hoping for something involving your chinstrip, and more futility. bummer. great user name though.
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