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Love (Free verse) by EouSou

Making love to grow a child Starts out by just a kiss When two peoples heart's Grow twice their size And rainbows cloud the sky Two hours of passion 9 months of love And years of tenderness Making all of life a single moment That began with just a kiss

==Doylum 29-Oct-03/7:04 PM
Two hours of passion my fats hairy dangleberried arse. Anyone who claims to last more than 2 minutes 12 seconds is either a malicious mellifluous mendaciant, and or a blond haired worbelling geordie tosser.


Otherwise this is second to none!"




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