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Love (Free verse) by EouSou

Making love to grow a child Starts out by just a kiss When two peoples heart's Grow twice their size And rainbows cloud the sky Two hours of passion 9 months of love And years of tenderness Making all of life a single moment That began with just a kiss

fair12 30-Oct-03/11:12 AM
This was very sweet - Naive, but sweet. Unless you've lived through a 4 year old whom you have to chase through a store - you've no idea - and the sweet sentimentality doesn't last...

As for Doylum's comments - if you're only lasting 2 min 12 sec. or bangin someone who does - they've drugs for that now - you may want to check into it...




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