| Re: a comment on Break Down by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
6-Jun-03/7:32 AM |
No, only when they're reading to a crowd, or sleeping in a crowd
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| Re: Never forget by sk8rs_rule_all |
6-Jun-03/3:21 AM |
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What no cement to mark the occasion?
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| Re: sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub |
5-Jun-03/10:35 AM |
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Gripping, and involved. 10
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| Re: A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig |
5-Jun-03/10:31 AM |
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I would change the title and the structuring eventually, to accomodate the story more.
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| Re: A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig |
5-Jun-03/10:30 AM |
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I'm suprised you can write this good outside a mousehole, anyway, it's oceans beyond your haiku that's for sure. 9.
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| Re: Carpet threading the sky by INTRANSIT |
5-Jun-03/10:27 AM |
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| Re: aquellos eramos by daniella |
5-Jun-03/10:26 AM |
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I think I saw three question marks in there beating up a beautiful theme.
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| Re: wish by daniella |
5-Jun-03/10:24 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Her Galactic Boudoir, his make-work by Bachus |
5-Jun-03/10:23 AM |
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Oh... Well, just so you know, now I'm #10 of 47 since we're uttering off random phrases to see what happens.
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| Re: C a n n i b a l by scitz |
5-Jun-03/10:20 AM |
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| Re: Taliban Ambush by scitz |
5-Jun-03/10:19 AM |
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I suppose counting is overated at this point. Or is that just the chamber music playing in the background?
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| Re: Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw |
5-Jun-03/10:12 AM |
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Why would I abuse my sweet son? He doesn't write shit poor poetry like this. If he did, mind you, I'd call him an ugly dike and throw him to the wolves. Also amyl nitrate is bad mmmmmmmkay, and for faggertz, I am a proud gay man, and I have never hurt a child in my life excepte for that twat Katie, and vipersna the magical chirping cunterspaniel, and that was because she left toxic snail tracks on my new spanish tile after her pa left brownie bum tracks on my new shag carpet. i guess that was his idea of walking? He walks like she writes, war has a way of making people do stupid shit huh vampissedoff, maybe one day, after your journey through the fields of child abuse you'll understand what it was all about. When that day arrives. Don't be suprised to wake up with a giant clitoris clear taped to the end of your nose, until then, do a popper, and please learn how to properly be insulting, because most of your poem is actually flattering 10!.
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| Re: 11th September (a senyru) by scitz |
4-Jun-03/6:17 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Iterated Fuck by nentwined |
4-Jun-03/6:13 PM |
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Glad to see your soul is still mia.
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| Re: a comment on Bad Timing by DeadtotheWorld |
3-Jun-03/10:52 PM |
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Dude that's sweet, but if you're dead to the world how are you talking to me, and how exactly do you classify, dead?
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| Re: Bad Timing by DeadtotheWorld |
3-Jun-03/8:46 PM |
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| Re: a comment on To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
3-Jun-03/8:42 PM |
Yes, YES! rataratararataratatararataratatartatratra *KABOOM* DIE you communist cum gurgling sycophants DIE! COCKAROACHES! speaking of roaches DA, do you remember in creep show, the bug short? I enjoyed that movie very much the second was so so. Have you ever seen Silver Bullit? That was just a very good movie I believe all around. Tomorrow check out this link, and give me a really spiritually traumatic review. something I can frame. Like King Kong dying of ovarian cancer, something really front page.
http://www.garageband.com/go/1WU8P9SB89
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| Re: Have You Ever Been In Love? by Katie |
3-Jun-03/8:26 PM |
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| Re: My anal protrusion by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
3-Jun-03/8:25 PM |
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| Re: Where I Stand by Katie |
3-Jun-03/8:23 PM |
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