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Carpet threading the sky

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Jun 2003 · 3 comments

Rigormortised feet makes one inhale the stench of sterility and the progressive regression of technology. A house made of ticky-tacky. Dip the lower eschelons and sip the friendly motion then load for bear the Praetorian compassion. Now leave.

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[9] scitz 5-Jun-03/8:05 AM Reply

09
and yes eschelons fits like a milliners hat. Well done its a daisy.

[8] horus8 5-Jun-03/10:27 AM Reply

Ha!

[8] Bill Z Bub 5-Jun-03/11:08 AM Reply

First half excellent. Second half confusing. Then again, I'm the idiot that wrote "soothing blisters of synthesis
walk on alkaline locks", so I have no right to say such things! I must be punished.
The title is a ten. I give the body seven. That averages out to 8.5!

Rock on.