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Carpet threading the sky (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Rigormortised feet makes one inhale the stench of sterility and the progressive regression of technology. A house made of ticky-tacky. Dip the lower eschelons and sip the friendly motion then load for bear the Praetorian compassion. Now leave.

scitz 5-Jun-03/8:05 AM
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and yes eschelons fits like a milliners hat. Well done its a daisy.




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