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wish (Free verse) by daniella
y o u w e r e h e r e w h e r e t h e p a r t i c l e s s t i l l b e a m t h r o u g h m y o w n p a r t i c u l a r l i g h t v i s i o n o f l o v e i n s o m e b a c k l i t d r e a m.


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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.0
Overall Rank: 1293
Posted: June 4, 2003 10:23 PM PDT; Last modified: June 4, 2003 10:23 PM PDT
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[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46 | 5-Jun-03/7:33 AM | Reply
sweet. Suite! SU-WEET!
[n/a] daniella @ 200.68.205.112 > INTRANSIT | 14-Jun-03/9:08 PM | Reply
as a matter of faqs, i had scribbled this on my wall in my bedroom suite.....
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 5-Jun-03/10:24 AM | Reply
Cute.
[n/a] daniella @ 200.68.200.37 > horus8 | 20-Jun-03/9:47 PM | Reply
cute... CUté
[8] richa @ 195.92.67.65 | 5-Jun-03/10:50 AM | Reply
interesting set out,
It can be read as a single line,
Very sweet sentiment
[n/a] daniella @ 127.0.0.1 > richa | 28-Oct-15/5:16 PM | Reply
thanks richa
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 5-Jun-03/2:49 PM | Reply
Indeed.
[9] embersandenvelopes @ 24.152.203.178 | 5-Apr-04/8:36 PM | Reply
concise and beautiful
[n/a] daniella @ 127.0.0.1 > embersandenvelopes | 28-Oct-15/5:15 PM | Reply
thank you thank you embersandenvelopes
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