Re: Adam's Apple by hotwire	3-Jun-03/12:19 AM
fag.
Re: That November Night by hotwire	2-Jun-03/11:49 PM
I really enjoyed your unacceptance of the past-tense, and your depiction of the word 'meant'. Really, it was captivating.
Re: Techno Whore by hotwire	2-Jun-03/11:45 PM
Indeedy.
Re: nothing is by w~* ATHENA *~w	2-Jun-03/11:39 PM
Yeah, pretty drunk.
Re: a comment on Four Chapters from the Detective Plum files by horus8	2-Jun-03/1:35 PM
No, make me.
Re: a comment on How I want to be by Felzpoet	2-Jun-03/12:03 PM
Are you implying that I'm an idiot? Or are you just trying take the focus off of this idiot's poetry?
Re: a comment on Mississipi Murder by scitz	2-Jun-03/11:57 AM
LOL! A-ha. Did you read the dirt on Martin Luther King? Hilarious. Really, this site is the cat's meow.
Re: a comment on Four Chapters from the Detective Plum files by horus8	2-Jun-03/10:57 AM
It's a bicep wound, and he feels the backdrip (basically, knows that he's bleeding) when he goes to hang his coat above his head. I suppose I did not make that clear enough for you? and yes the borderline part is redundant, but these things happen when one writes from the heart, and not the brain.lol
Re: The Door by Wulf	2-Jun-03/12:23 AM
Ah, good clean fun.
Re: a comment on Plucking hearts and banjo by horus8	1-Jun-03/8:52 PM
You know what? You are funny.
Re: a comment on Plucking hearts and banjo by horus8	1-Jun-03/8:50 PM
I was of the opinion that a counterfactual could be applied to any fact able to be contrasted against its origin of opinion, which ironically would make this comment a counterfactual. Now, on to more relevant criteria. You think I should continue with Plum in the coat-room, or post, and or pre-grandfather's feast of 'the obese attendant'.
Re: a comment on Plucking hearts and banjo by horus8	1-Jun-03/6:43 PM
Easy there Skyler, it's a poem not a personality test.
Re: a comment on Plucking hearts and banjo by horus8	1-Jun-03/6:42 PM
If it was, I'd believe you.
Re: a comment on Collapsing the heart by Sugar Victim	1-Jun-03/6:39 PM
You are welcome.
Re: a comment on shopper by zzinnia66	1-Jun-03/6:38 PM
lol.
Re: shopper by zzinnia66	1-Jun-03/6:37 PM
Of course.
Re: Aftermath of a boston marriage by Sugar Victim	1-Jun-03/4:19 PM
Overall, not a bad collection, but it's not setting new standards, that's for sure. I would of given you sixes and sevens. Maybe an eight after some editing.
Re: Aftermath of a boston marriage by Sugar Victim	1-Jun-03/4:17 PM
"prays for hope as her world uncurls" unfurls, would work better. nameless. "Maybe though dieng you'll see we're not unalike!"" through dying. Also, the piece needs to put come commas to work for it.
Re: Collapsing the heart by Sugar Victim	1-Jun-03/4:13 PM
"one second you cold ,the next hot" you're. It's. "behind still holding to you" onto.
Re: ILLusion in Falsity by Sugar Victim	1-Jun-03/4:10 PM
excuses, notice the c.