| Re: a comment on Plucking hearts and banjo by horus8 |
1-Jun-03/4:05 PM |
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No, go fuck yourself with a portable radio.
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| Re: a comment on Dont break my heart by Cali |
1-Jun-03/11:13 AM |
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But she's into to partying and animals?
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| Re: a comment on There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8 |
1-Jun-03/10:47 AM |
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| Re: I Am(Defined) by lil cindy lu who |
31-May-03/11:50 PM |
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| Re: Taken Captive by lil cindy lu who |
31-May-03/11:50 PM |
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I went to dance but my legs fell off.
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| Re: Afraid to love you by lil cindy lu who |
31-May-03/11:49 PM |
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Impossible to dance to I give it a 4.
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| Re: a comment on I shot speed by horus8 |
31-May-03/11:48 PM |
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Anyone that would dance to this is five
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| Re: The Application by Fear of Garbage |
31-May-03/9:27 PM |
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Thief, otherwise tragically hip and audacious.
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| Re: a comment on There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8 |
31-May-03/7:47 PM |
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I demand that you force your daughter to read more poetry, because she is just moving through a circle of bad writing habits at this point in time that inexcusable, really, she needs to read poetry, a lot of powerful poetry Welsh, Italian, French, Rimbaud, Dylan thomas, poe, Ezra pound, Jack kerouak because her poetry is suffering from a close minded selfish neglect that few recover from, and no poet should do that to poetry ever whether it's their own or not.
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| Re: The Best This Dream Can Offer(Revised) by Deborah Carter |
31-May-03/6:24 PM |
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| Re: Shapeless Love by DeadtotheWorld |
30-May-03/9:13 PM |
"---Black bile oozed between Grandfather's lips, and
dripped onto the attendant's bloated abdomen. The
drip became a trickle, which became a steady stream,
and soon he was vomiting a thick torrent of the
shining liquid.
---Where it touched the attendant, it boiled and
frothed and formed a sickly lather, and as it
bubbled it ate away at the flesh. The skin on the
man's stomach was becoming liquid and starting to
slide around. Beads of blood sprang up where the
upper layer had been completely dissolved.
---Grandfather's head lolled forward, and underneath his
bushy, flaking eyebrows, his blind eyes rolled
insanely. With a sudden fluid movement of his arm,
he unhooked the straight razor from its holster and
flipped out the dull blade. It was just as he
remembered.
---His obscenely gnarled hands trembled, and his
breath was rapid. Grandfather hunched over the
attendant, reaching out and stroking the places that
had been prepared by the mucus. His jaw still hung
slightly open as he bent down for a closer view...
---And Grandfather began to shave."
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| Re: the past is the past is past by phbiscuit |
30-May-03/9:11 PM |
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| Re: Untouchable by darkshark |
30-May-03/9:09 PM |
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| Re: Twilight's Sweet Embrace by kassanna |
30-May-03/8:27 PM |
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I believe you can do much better then this, and unlike Sir heff and Johny boy, I will pull it out of you out inch by inch out of thick poetic love, and not scrotismal boy hood pressure. lol
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| Re: a comment on Obsequies by horus8 |
30-May-03/7:53 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Obsequies by horus8 |
30-May-03/5:19 PM |
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They pay extra for everything
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| Re: a comment on Obsequies by horus8 |
29-May-03/8:16 PM |
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Show me what? Your vagina. Or that you can write.
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| Re: Seclusion (missing chorus) by Felzpoet |
29-May-03/3:01 PM |
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I'm convinced that you could fuck up a bag of tube socks before even wearing them. You must be punished.
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| Re: a comment on Plastic Posies by BleedingRose |
29-May-03/2:12 PM |
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Are you in love with my alter ego?
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| Re: Cliche by Blue Magpie |
28-May-03/3:27 PM |
Oh, I see, ten duh, shit that means all of mine are off, fuck, back to the drawing board. that will atleast give me something to edit tonight.
Great Sonnet.
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