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The Best This Dream Can Offer(Revised) (Lyric) by Deborah Carter
I When darkness falls - the sandman calls, Invading my dreams - once more, Chances are - I'll see you again as I did - the night before. Chorus ..... And chances are - there will be - another time and place - for our hearts - to join together, And chances are - things will be the same - as when we met - and vowed our love forever. II We may be far apart - but never in our hearts, Knowing how much we care - always makes our love start. Each moment shared - is a tribute to our dream, And in our minds - brilliant as a star. Chorus ..... And chances are - there will be - another time and place - for our hearts - to join together, And chances are - things will be the same - as when we met - and vowed our love forever. Musical Break ..... Bridge ..... In my dreams I see your face - and feel the touch of your fingertips, And though fate has intervened - to keep us apart, And left me with a - cold cold heart, The memory of the warmth of your kiss - is always near. Chorus ..... And chances are - there will be - another time and place - for our hearts - to join together, And chances are - things will be the same - as when we met - and vowed our love forever. III Somehow each night - you come to me - upon a whispered prayer, And the darkness shrouds my needs - of wanting you more and more, For only in my dreams - will all my longings be fullfilled in the arms of the one - that I adore. Tag ..... chances are I'll see you ... in a place called somewhere between the hours ... of darkness and the dawn lying beside you ... is the best this dream can offer for when the morning comes ... you'll be gone. (c) by: Deborah M. Carter arangement by Bill Murray

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9052
Posted: May 31, 2003 5:22 PM PDT; Last modified: May 31, 2003 5:22 PM PDT
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[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 31-May-03/6:24 PM | Reply
Spectral
[10] lil cindy lu who @ 64.12.96.46 | 31-May-03/11:06 PM | Reply
I like this version a lot better...you got it going on girl
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