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Untouchable (Free verse) by darkshark
The withering women
Tremble as they stare
Out the window
Past the home, hill, and horizon
Crying secretly as gold is scraped together
From the remains of the child
Prepared and presented by the father
The impure handled by the Impure
Offered and burned in remembrance
Without tear or shudder
The cycle is never finished
Ashes to dust to plant to mouth to life
All is for good
Stare at the river, then go home
Everyone is dry
All is for good
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Weighted score: 5.0476813
Overall Rank: 6856
Posted: May 30, 2003 8:35 PM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2003 8:35 PM PDT
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