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Taken Captive (Free verse) by lil cindy lu who
As Our bodies play hide and seek, Your tongue probes my mouth, searching for yesterday's kiss. You know how to ask for sex in six different languages. I wish you were as proficient in love. When you leave, I bury my head in your pillow, dare not breathe, lest your scent take me captive again. Later, your voice crawls out of my answering machine "I want you" then Using that red dress you bought me, I smother your pleas.

Up the ladder: An Ode to Anal Joy
Down the ladder: You Had To Go

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.4482355
Overall Rank: 2892
Posted: May 29, 2003 7:13 PM PDT; Last modified: May 29, 2003 7:13 PM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 31-May-03/11:50 PM | Reply
I went to dance but my legs fell off.
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