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Seclusion (missing chorus) (Lyric) by Felzpoet
Seclusion This life has become over bearing I’m trapped inside of my own caring All of these emotions are so wearing Being alone is a forgone conclusion Seclusion The walls are closing in on me Is alone how I’m meant to be? Is seclusion my only way to be free? Life is such an intrusion. Seclusion I wish for all this pain to end I don’t need to set a trend I just need not to falter and never bend Life is an illusion

Up the ladder: 5
Down the ladder: drops of blood in the wind

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11575
Posted: May 29, 2003 12:52 PM PDT; Last modified: May 29, 2003 12:52 PM PDT
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[4] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-May-03/3:01 PM | Reply
I'm convinced that you could fuck up a bag of tube socks before even wearing them. You must be punished.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.97 > horus8 | 29-May-03/5:24 PM | Reply
I have to wear tube socks because my legs are tubes.
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