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drops of blood in the wind (Free verse) by crwncka1
one drop two drop three drop four drop the very last four drops that my forever bleeding heart will bleed today today is that one day my bleeding heart has longed for for today is the day i forever perish from this bleeding heart of mine i guess its only what i asked for its what i deserve i know that much to separate from all this misery to separate from all this pain i feel today but i'am still here you see! but my bleeding heart is forever left behind its now just a memory of times gone by i do have the heavens to thank for that for they sent down this goddess to me just in time it seemed so miraculous her i owe my life to i say from the heart for it was her that caught my very last drop of blood from my forever bleeding heart so it could be forever healed

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11571
Posted: June 12, 2003 5:10 AM PDT; Last modified: June 12, 2003 5:10 AM PDT
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[4] deleted user @ 81.91.144.8 | 12-Jun-03/12:58 PM | Reply
i think you should find some famous singer to sing it!
[4] deleted user @ 81.91.144.8 | 12-Jun-03/1:00 PM | Reply
Besides, it reminds me of Chris de burgh's(?)"This bleeding heart"!!
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Jun-03/1:36 PM | Reply
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