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drops of blood in the wind (Free verse) by crwncka1
one drop two drop
three drop four drop
the very last four drops
that my forever bleeding heart
will bleed today
today is that one day my bleeding heart has longed for
for today is the day i forever perish
from this bleeding heart of mine
i guess its only what i asked for
its what i deserve i know that much
to separate from all this misery
to separate from all this pain i feel today
but i'am still here you see!
but my bleeding heart is forever left behind
its now just a memory of times gone by
i do have the heavens to thank for that
for they sent down this goddess to me
just in time
it seemed so miraculous
her i owe my life to i say from the heart
for it was her
that caught my very last drop of blood
from my forever bleeding heart
so it could be forever healed
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11576
Posted: June 12, 2003 5:10 AM PDT; Last modified: June 12, 2003 5:10 AM PDT
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