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the past is the past is past (Free verse) by phbiscuit
Running like water Every time it flashes My heart breathes morbidly Even though I know a lie for a lie Memories reorganize and disturb truth Bringing back a shadow for cloaking my life Eventually I will stumble and choke by my own weight Running like wildfire Leaving time charred Incinerating hope Forming an end Even for those who forget

Up the ladder: alone in winter

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9819
Posted: May 30, 2003 8:48 PM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2003 8:48 PM PDT
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[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 30-May-03/9:11 PM | Reply
fat ass.
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