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the past is the past is past (Free verse) by phbiscuit
Running like water
Every time it flashes
My heart breathes morbidly
Even though I know a lie for a lie
Memories reorganize and disturb truth
Bringing back a shadow for cloaking my life
Eventually I will stumble and choke by my own weight
Running like wildfire
Leaving time charred
Incinerating hope
Forming an end
Even for those who forget
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Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9824
Posted: May 30, 2003 8:48 PM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2003 8:48 PM PDT
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