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Free verse № 50947

the past is the past is past

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 May 2003 · 1 comment

Running like water Every time it flashes My heart breathes morbidly Even though I know a lie for a lie Memories reorganize and disturb truth Bringing back a shadow for cloaking my life Eventually I will stumble and choke by my own weight Running like wildfire Leaving time charred Incinerating hope Forming an end Even for those who forget

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[9] horus8 30-May-03/9:11 PM Reply
fat ass.