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"How Often, Under Starry Skies" (Other) by anastomosis
. How often, under starry skies, I ruminate the ancient lore And think about the wondrous wise, Who thought all things we thought before, Of earlier men, without the pen, Who wondered hard and thought like-wise And also thought, as I tonight, Of men before who thought aright And knew their thoughts were just reprise And doubtless also doubted then If profit came to think before, Or, if it did, would come again.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9825
Posted: June 9, 2003 9:49 PM PDT; Last modified: June 9, 2003 9:49 PM PDT
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 | 10-Jun-03/4:04 PM | Reply
A subtle yet resonant piece. The colourful imagery and bewildering rhyme scheme are reminiscent of some of the later works of Tennyson, and even Chives. The rather pallid references to leukaemia, though somewhat out of place in a poeme about suicide, add a touch of humility that I feel is so badly lacking from contemporary western literature. This reviewer looks forward to anastomosis's next, even riper, comment deletion.

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[n/a] anastomosis @ 209.92.230.65 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 10-Jun-03/4:13 PM | Reply
What does this poem have to with leukaemeia??

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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 > anastomosis | 10-Jun-03/4:52 PM | Reply
I thought it was about someone's last night on Earth before they died of leukaemia... I'm sorry if I was wrong. I guess it just goes to show that different poemes can mean different things to different people. It's all about opinions, really. Catch you later.
[9] jsd @ 147.9.165.67 | 11-Apr-04/10:31 PM | Reply
As a philosophy major, I really enjoy the topic of this. <grin> Good job.
[n/a] deleted user @ 68.164.120.165 > jsd | 20-Apr-04/3:16 PM | Reply
Thanks very much, Philosophy Major. I'm the author of the poem, and I'm grateful for someone who seems to have understood what I wrote.
[n/a] zodiac @ 152.18.33.195 > jsd | 20-Apr-04/4:32 PM | Reply
As a one-semester philosophy major, I declare all philosophy majors to be gays except Ludwig Wittgenstein.
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