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Twilight's Sweet Embrace (Lyric) by kassanna Beneath a starlit canopy
There is a secret place
where our two hearts
Become as one
In twilight's sweet embrace
Under evening's somber glow
As daylight takes to sleep
Our souls converge
In Passions Play
In the dreams we keep
Nightly taking wishful flight
Upon the winds we soar
Two hearts pledging
Endless love
As here we meet once more
Upon a bridge we've built
Across a peaceful stream
We let imagination flow
Within the mind
and in our dream
Up the ladder:
Dimestore Angel
Down the ladder:
shopper
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Posted: May 29, 2003 6:54 PM PDT; Last modified: May 29, 2003 6:54 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7667 Comments:
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deleted user @ 162.83.138.47
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29-May-03/7:12 PM
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Would work as a song with if you make a chorus. Nice job though, i like the title. (9)
very moving -9-
I believe you can do much better then this, and unlike Sir heff and Johny boy, I will pull it out of you out inch by inch out of thick poetic love, and not scrotismal boy hood pressure. lol
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