Lyric № 50824

Twilight's Sweet Embrace

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 May 2003 · 3 comments

Beneath a starlit canopy There is a secret place where our two hearts Become as one In twilight's sweet embrace Under evening's somber glow As daylight takes to sleep Our souls converge In Passions Play In the dreams we keep Nightly taking wishful flight Upon the winds we soar Two hearts pledging Endless love As here we meet once more Upon a bridge we've built Across a peaceful stream We let imagination flow Within the mind and in our dream

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[9] deleted user 29-May-03/7:12 PM Reply

Would work as a song with if you make a chorus. Nice job though, i like the title. (9)

[9] sir_heff 30-May-03/11:22 AM Reply

very moving -9-

[7] horus8 30-May-03/8:27 PM Reply

I believe you can do much better then this, and unlike Sir heff and Johny boy, I will pull it out of you out inch by inch out of thick poetic love, and not scrotismal boy hood pressure. lol