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How I want to be (Sonnet) by Felzpoet Everyday I say: âtomorrow Iâll feel better"
But I never do
Everyday someone tells me to âforget herâ
But all I want is you
I want for us to be
Cause I know I can give you everything
Youâre the best thing for me
But you would still never wear my ring
I would give you everything I could
You think these are all lies
Not that you ever would
But try seeing this through my eyes
I only have one life to live, so Iâll do all I can do
To live the rest of my life despite losing you
Up the ladder:
Suicidal Thoughts #2
Down the ladder:
Snowball
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Posted: June 1, 2003 6:51 PM PDT; Last modified: June 1, 2003 6:51 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.336177 Overall Rank: 3450 Comments:
i love this one also, and i'm not lieing. I klnow how you feel. Keep at it. And to hell with the idiots.
Are you implying that I'm an idiot? Or are you just trying take the focus off of this idiot's poetry?
i really like this one you sound very sincere
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It's a common enough mistake to make, Felzpoet. You have misinterpreted your desperate longing as some kind of indescribable compatibility or even destiny. The sooner you work out that there is no such thing as being meant for someone, and the sooner you work out that there is nothing inherent about you that makes you compatible with people you desperately long for, the sooner a) you will feel better b) you will concentrate on an activity more worthwhile c) the members of poemeranker will stop having to read your terrible poetry. I hope you realise it is for your own good as much as the good of everyone around you.