Poemranker [Replying] Fri May 03 23:09:27 PDT 2024

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How I want to be (Sonnet) by Felzpoet

Everyday I say: âtomorrow Iâll feel better" But I never do Everyday someone tells me to âforget herâ But all I want is you I want for us to be Cause I know I can give you everything Youâre the best thing for me But you would still never wear my ring I would give you everything I could You think these are all lies Not that you ever would But try seeing this through my eyes I only have one life to live, so Iâll do all I can do To live the rest of my life despite losing you

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.

1-Jun-03/7:28 PM

Many of your poemes seem to be based on a rather curious assumption: that you have some property P that is neither an occurrent property nor a disposition; nor is it supervenient on any delineable set of your other properties. It is unclear what such a property could be.

It's a common enough mistake to make, Felzpoet. You have misinterpreted your desperate longing as some kind of indescribable compatibility or even destiny. The sooner you work out that there is no such thing as being meant for someone, and the sooner you work out that there is nothing inherent about you that makes you compatible with people you desperately long for, the sooner a) you will feel better b) you will concentrate on an activity more worthwhile c) the members of poemeranker will stop having to read your terrible poetry. I hope you realise it is for your own good as much as the good of everyone around you.

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