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Suicidal Thoughts #2 (Free verse) by CrAzYlAdY Surukain Why do people even bother
Let me grieve in my silent sunder
Rope, water, knives
Leave many ways behind
To leave all in their world of blinded bliss
I tried and fought
The suicidal thoughts
But it was in vain
I had lost
Everything
Children Laugh
Children Play
But I am lost in dismay
The pills are ready
Here, within my grasp
Here, finally at long last
I write this poem
Not for u
But for me
When I do myself through
Up the ladder:
Esperanza
Down the ladder:
How I want to be
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Posted: February 23, 2003 8:17 PM PST; Last modified: February 23, 2003 8:17 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.336177 Overall Rank: 3449 Comments:
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nocturnalism @ 4.41.65.182
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23-Feb-03/8:24 PM
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I feel for your pain.
It is not worth it. Pull yourself out of your funk. Eat some chocolate, watch a comedy, go for a walk or a run--even if it is cold outside (especially if its cold outside) then write some more poems.
Nice..you have a real talent....
thx for the votes once again ppl. I hafta say this here that one of my poems has a mistake, if u read In the darkness, it says thrift, its supposed to be drift, but i screwed up. Once again thx!
ok you people scare me you really need some mental help!
yall need to go to www.poemsbybastards.com its more of yalls type of thing
Sooo...howzabout "yall" quit bitching and moaning about how we're all too mean and either thicken yo'skin, give us a single reason to be nice to you (this is the one where you write non-ass-wipings) or kindly go fuck yourself and your ungrammatical, churlish attempts to judge a bunch of internet schmucks. hugs 'n' kisses!
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