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Suicidal Thoughts #2

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Feb 2003 · 7 comments

Why do people even bother Let me grieve in my silent sunder Rope, water, knives Leave many ways behind To leave all in their world of blinded bliss I tried and fought The suicidal thoughts But it was in vain I had lost Everything Children Laugh Children Play But I am lost in dismay The pills are ready Here, within my grasp Here, finally at long last I write this poem Not for u But for me When I do myself through

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[10] nocturnalism 23-Feb-03/8:24 PM Reply

I feel for your pain.

[9] hipster flare 24-Feb-03/6:10 AM Reply

It is not worth it. Pull yourself out of your funk. Eat some chocolate, watch a comedy, go for a walk or a run--even if it is cold outside (especially if its cold outside) then write some more poems.

[10] Ray 24-Feb-03/9:25 AM Reply

Nice..you have a real talent....

[n/a] CrAzYlAdY Surukain › Ray 24-Feb-03/9:38 AM Reply

thx for the votes once again ppl. I hafta say this here that one of my poems has a mistake, if u read In the darkness, it says thrift, its supposed to be drift, but i screwed up. Once again thx!

[n/a] deleted user 24-Feb-03/1:22 PM Reply

ok you people scare me you really need some mental help!

[n/a] deleted user 24-Feb-03/1:26 PM Reply

yall need to go to www.poemsbybastards.com its more of yalls type of thing

[n/a] razorgrin › deleted user 25-Feb-03/1:55 PM Reply

Sooo...howzabout "yall" quit bitching and moaning about how we're all too mean and either thicken yo'skin, give us a single reason to be nice to you (this is the one where you write non-ass-wipings) or kindly go fuck yourself and your ungrammatical, churlish attempts to judge a bunch of internet schmucks. hugs 'n' kisses!