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Adam's Apple (Lyric) by hotwire
For a long time I couldn't Understand Why Adam put up with Eve's demands What Adam got I never knew Was the job that eve actually blew Until this day I wonder why Until the day I said, Okay I'll try So there I had in my hand Adam's apple, skin tone like sand I took a bite, it was so delish you know you want it even if only in a wish I see why Eve could not resist Adam's apple there in my fist So much pleasure, so much pain But the feeling it can't be explained Not enough words rush through my head as I laid spend there in my bed Then reality it ran like thunder as I was left to sit and wonder Is Adam's apple all that bad After all that fun I just had Maybe someone told me wrong Maybe it was that hit from the bong All I know is I can't be late For I get Adam's apple if I'm great at giving what Adam's loves from me to polish his apple better than Eve I took that job from Eve once I started I'd never leave Adam's apple tasted so nice that I thought I'd try Adam's apple twice

Up the ladder: The Remnant
Down the ladder: Herne

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7270
Posted: June 2, 2003 11:47 PM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2003 11:47 PM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 3-Jun-03/12:19 AM | Reply
fag.
[n/a] Islander @ 202.123.20.117 | 3-Jun-03/9:37 AM | Reply
That's great !!! *claps*
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