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Herne (Ode) by OneFingerAnswer
Walking in the wood
In the night mists that autumn
I saw him for myself
In that boggy bottom
Through brambles and in thickets,
Dark golden yellows, greens, and browns,
Antlers blending with the branches,
He rode through his grounds
Softly sinking in the humus
Shadowed discretely in gray
Saddle and harness absent
He rode upon his bay
Slipping off the path
Leaving no new trail
He stepped into a halo
Swallowed by a light soft and pale
Like waters under the wind
Somewhere upon that hill
The single print to show his passing
Slowly started to fill
Walking in the wood
In the night mists that autumn
I saw him for myself
In that boggy bottom
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Weighted score: 5.029801
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Posted: June 29, 2003 4:34 AM PDT; Last modified: June 29, 2003 2:01 PM PDT
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"He rode upon the bay" Unless he owns it?
And a bay is a kind of horse. Auburn with a black mane I think.