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To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world (Haiku) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. Stop writing about
your tedious, trite love life.
No-one gives a shit.
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Posted: June 2, 2003 3:53 PM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2003 3:53 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.472164 Overall Rank: 2833 Comments:
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Islander @ 202.123.20.117
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3-Jun-03/9:25 AM
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No-one gives a shit or u don't? :)
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
> Islander
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3-Jun-03/9:44 AM
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That's right.
If we write about sex?
Stop reading about it. I've never forced you to read any of it. People generally write about what matters to them. You don't like it then just move on. No one gives a shit about what you give a shit about.
No-one gives a shit about whether you think people give a shit about what I give a shit about. Your poems are shit and they are shit. And banging and banging and banging and bonking and bonkping -- and CUM.
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I understand what you mean with this... good read
Thou art violently carried away from grace.
---Henry IV, part I
short, sweet, to the point. Great!
truth. Love it. 10
I want this on billboards, t-shirts and tattooed backward on the foreheads of all aspiring poetes. Beautiful.
Your poem is as empty as your wit (in that you couldn't imagine where to properly place it).
Confessor
You're gay.
No. But you smell of me.
'Oh.'
LOL
then what are we supposed to write about?
The elderly.
and shrubbery.
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