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Free verse № 51431

Where I Stand

by Katie

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Jun 2003 · 3 comments

Standing in the rain of a broken heart, Floating in memories of 'we'll never be apart'. Under the light of a broken night, With tears of a lost love, running from my eyes. I see you, I feel you, I miss you, and all those things you use to do I'm calling, I'm praying, I'm screaming your name, and through a broken vein, B L E E D S my tears of yesterday (I tried a funky format, with a different rhyming scheme)

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3 comments

[7] horus8 3-Jun-03/8:23 PM Reply
hmmmmm.
[7] scitz 4-Jun-03/9:27 AM Reply
Where do you like to stand Katie?

And where do you most like to sit?

Answer these 2 questions and I will marry my pit bull in white dress.
[10] Stephen Robins 1-Oct-03/8:15 AM Reply
Hey I came again!