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Where I Stand (Free verse) by Katie
Standing in the rain of a broken heart, Floating in memories of 'we'll never be apart'. Under the light of a broken night, With tears of a lost love, running from my eyes. I see you, I feel you, I miss you, and all those things you use to do I'm calling, I'm praying, I'm screaming your name, and through a broken vein, B L E E D S my tears of yesterday (I tried a funky format, with a different rhyming scheme)

Up the ladder: Child of my Buttocks

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.2
Weighted score: 6.6
Overall Rank: 600
Posted: June 3, 2003 6:27 PM PDT; Last modified: June 3, 2003 6:27 PM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 3-Jun-03/8:23 PM | Reply
hmmmmm.
[7] scitz @ 62.105.88.10 | 4-Jun-03/9:27 AM | Reply
Where do you like to stand Katie?

And where do you most like to sit?

Answer these 2 questions and I will marry my pit bull in white dress.
[10] Stephen Robins @ 213.253.24.101 | 1-Oct-03/8:15 AM | Reply
Hey I came again!
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