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Where I Stand (Free verse) by Katie
Standing in the rain of a broken heart,
Floating in memories of 'we'll never be apart'.
Under the light of a broken night,
With tears of a lost love, running from my eyes.
I see you, I feel you,
I miss you, and all those things you use to do
I'm calling, I'm praying,
I'm screaming your name,
and through a broken vein,
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my tears of yesterday
(I tried a funky format, with a different rhyming scheme)
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.2
Weighted score: 6.6
Overall Rank: 600
Posted: June 3, 2003 6:27 PM PDT; Last modified: June 3, 2003 6:27 PM PDT
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