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Where I Stand (Free verse) by Katie

Standing in the rain of a broken heart, Floating in memories of 'we'll never be apart'. Under the light of a broken night, With tears of a lost love, running from my eyes. I see you, I feel you, I miss you, and all those things you use to do I'm calling, I'm praying, I'm screaming your name, and through a broken vein, B L E E D S my tears of yesterday (I tried a funky format, with a different rhyming scheme)

horus8 3-Jun-03/8:23 PM
hmmmmm.




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