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Bad Timing (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld
Fiery Erosion with an open fire Depew dense but nevertheless Conquered to the wire, Hate breeder flawless without desire Rose up with two flats on your tires The expression on your face is so plain and dire As you run and chase after the automobile Owned by that one guy, Oscar Mayer I think you were confused mislead and abused Because you kept shouting “hey Mike Myers” Well at least in this life time you had a flier So now your 15 minutes of fame is up And you take it bad, A little pissed off and well a little mad You decided to shout meaningless names out While a guy passes by with a gun In reaction he thinks you curse at him This is when you die, this is when your life is none

Up the ladder: Invasion
Down the ladder: Pendulum swing lines

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.857143
Weighted score: 5.4994626
Overall Rank: 2729
Posted: June 3, 2003 8:27 PM PDT; Last modified: June 3, 2003 8:27 PM PDT
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[5] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 3-Jun-03/8:46 PM | Reply
http://www.garageband.com/go/1WU8P9SB89

Tomorrow if you veiw this link I'll shoot my penis out of a toaster right at your bleeding twinky
[n/a] DeadtotheWorld @ 12.80.122.178 > horus8 | 3-Jun-03/8:50 PM | Reply
lmao, I have no idea what that really means, but dude I respect you nonetheless
[5] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > DeadtotheWorld | 3-Jun-03/10:52 PM | Reply
Dude that's sweet, but if you're dead to the world how are you talking to me, and how exactly do you classify, dead?
[n/a] DeadtotheWorld @ 12.80.122.238 > horus8 | 4-Jun-03/7:34 PM | Reply
Dude I'm dead to the world because I like to write sad stuff but like it also sounds prett kewl, and I can talk to you becuase they have the internet in hell.
[9] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 4-Jun-03/7:42 PM | Reply
Well this is better than 90% of the stuff on poemeranker. I suppose that means I should rate it 9.
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