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Bad Timing (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld

Fiery Erosion with an open fire Depew dense but nevertheless Conquered to the wire, Hate breeder flawless without desire Rose up with two flats on your tires The expression on your face is so plain and dire As you run and chase after the automobile Owned by that one guy, Oscar Mayer I think you were confused mislead and abused Because you kept shouting “hey Mike Myers” Well at least in this life time you had a flier So now your 15 minutes of fame is up And you take it bad, A little pissed off and well a little mad You decided to shout meaningless names out While a guy passes by with a gun In reaction he thinks you curse at him This is when you die, this is when your life is none

horus8 3-Jun-03/10:52 PM
Dude that's sweet, but if you're dead to the world how are you talking to me, and how exactly do you classify, dead?




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