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Free verse № 40529

Her Galactic Boudoir, his make-work

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Feb 2003 · Edited 4 Jun 2003 · 11 comments

YESTERDAY; You could say it was a nice fit. I foamed at the mouth, ears cropped. Looky-looky now in Felix's bag. A stethoscope, and toon bandaids. A sticky note: Don't forget to rent Mr. Frost with Jeff Goldbloomenstein. TODAY; Grocery bags sticking out of drawers. I hate those cluttering see through things. They're every where, but there's no food. Just paper and plastic bags wedged between the side of my fridge and an ugly paint chipped wall that I share with an idea. TOMORROW; A pathetic shape, and complex notion. You are so brave, and sure of something. How about taking a look in my telescope. That's right you son of a bitch. I've found it and named it properly. "The cracked fish and loaf." Something for us to remember. Together.

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11 comments

[n/a] horus8 17-Feb-03/2:11 PM Reply
I'm amazed you can even tie your shoes, let alone concentrate all of your magical powers to bury the east coast in a blanket of your racist demeanor. pickle chin.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. horus8 4-Jun-03/4:16 PM Reply
"a lot of those people are the same person, and vote and
comment on their own poems because they’re that bad."
[n/a] Bachus -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Jun-03/4:24 PM Reply
Yes, and no. That horribly desperate.
[n/a] Bachus -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Jun-03/5:10 PM Reply
Get to the point. COL.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. Bachus 4-Jun-03/5:12 PM Reply
Every day for the past ten fucking years has been like Indiana Jones and the fucking Temple of Doom. I've never had a vacation. I've never been at ease. That's all just an illusion.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Jun-03/9:43 PM Reply
I still don't quite grab what you're saying. Are you saying that because I've had a horrible life somehow that affects how I feel, and what I say? Or, how I suck a thick shaft of money ala jewtube?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. Jeremi B. Handrinos 4-Jun-03/10:30 PM Reply
I'm not saying anything. I'm just uttering random phrases to see what happens.
[n/a] horus8 -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Jun-03/10:23 AM Reply
Oh... Well, just so you know, now I'm #10 of 47 since we're uttering off random phrases to see what happens.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub horus8 5-Jun-03/10:32 AM Reply
armadillo ecstasy?
[9] spank me baby yeah 5-Jun-03/5:13 AM Reply
lol. 9
[10] wEdible Underpantsw 5-Jun-03/11:49 AM Reply
CUNT
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