Re: Untitled by greym0on	16-Jan-03/7:45 PM
lovely.
Re: Old Man by keatsImnot	16-Jan-03/2:41 PM
I'm partial to poppies and soldiers, and revolution. Not just because i have the band morphine blaring 11 currently either. nice quick verse here. cut and dry. have a 9.
Re: a comment on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin	16-Jan-03/2:38 PM
truly hilarious. Your wit is as honed as ever, both your reply to this idiots comment and your mastery of the limerick. bravo. 10!
Re: a comment on Clever Device? This is how you hunt angels with an Ashton Kirchner dude where's my car tattoo and legos by horus8	16-Jan-03/1:00 PM
Come on, those had nothing to do with your username. You know I love your work, and i think that you are very clever. You just inspired me, and if you listen to the song, it is an unclever device, hence the ashton kirchner mentality and voice i used in the song.
Re: triple suicide server line by Bill Z Bub	15-Jan-03/8:37 PM
And there you have it folks! a half an hour with Bill and Horus8, come see us next week, same time, same place....on "LETS COOK WITH SULPHUR" thanks for watching us...coming up next Bachus interviews Nicholas jones in an exlusive behind the scenes conversation with the famous welsh poet. See you there..thanks for tuning into the 'eye of horus' on poemranker's underground channel "Quaker". <brought to you by 'dismal glasses' the only way wear shades and 'fotohut' more than just thatch and 5 by 7 double prints>
Re: route nine by Bill Z Bub	15-Jan-03/8:29 PM
Another favorite of mine. Fucking rad.
Re: alienheart by Bill Z Bub	15-Jan-03/8:27 PM
"what switch in our alien hearts makes us part?" needs one more word like 'today' or jete' crochet j-bay (just kidding on the last one) or some down beat otherwise a serious favorite of mine..i realize i've been giving you votes in this run that will keep you from re-editing, that's cool, i understand..these poems are really moving and sculpted, and i don't blame you. enjoy.
Re: unsent by Bill Z Bub	15-Jan-03/8:20 PM
the 'slowly' might look more sexy next to the 'that' and there was a speed bump on the tongue somewhere in the middle. lots of fun though! you're a realy clever writer that tis for surely.
Re: flight (a poem written in high school) by Bill Z Bub	15-Jan-03/8:13 PM
Real good!...can dusty be another word though...more...i don't know rare?
Re: strange beds (1989) by Bill Z Bub	15-Jan-03/8:10 PM
" inside my head, a quick intake of breath on these strange beds." might flow better like inside of my head, a quick intake of breath upon these strange beds.
Re: strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub	15-Jan-03/8:03 PM
Sorry, i've been just missing you lately.9
Re: a comment on On Wanting to Know The Truth by dougsoderstrom	15-Jan-03/4:54 PM
What the hell are you talking about? You're Doug? Noooooooooooooooo! you filthy bastard!!!!!!!! No, realy. What the hell are you chirping about now? And there's some good looking smart guy called 666, with a fucking sweet volvo calling himself you too. So are you Ben, Doug, or Nicholas Monson, jones? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! mother mary, my mucous membranes are drying out, the pain!!!!!!!. i'm going to go play devil may cry now.
Re: a comment on lost love by cherish	15-Jan-03/4:44 PM
Nice volvo, but are you -=Dark_Angel=-?
Re: a comment on The blue light special. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	15-Jan-03/10:00 AM
a limerick, not always, need do that.
Re: -=Dark_Angel=- RAP by poemwanker	15-Jan-03/9:57 AM
my favorite part was when his homies just laughed, and when they stole his spleen, but since you already have a lovely zero. let like attract like, and carry you to the worst list.
Re: a comment on Clever Device? This is how you hunt angels with an Ashton Kirchner dude where's my car tattoo and legos by horus8	15-Jan-03/9:45 AM
just a song i wrote for dark angel, that's all...don't you know someone who has a g3 or g4 mac? then you could download the 53 song library and shake your booty, shake your booty, baby...gonna get your groove on.
Re: a comment on Clever Device? This is how you hunt angels with an Ashton Kirchner dude where's my car tattoo and legos by horus8	15-Jan-03/9:40 AM
what's that on your nose? mascarpone?
Re: a comment on Clever Device? This is how you hunt angels with an Ashton Kirchner dude where's my car tattoo and legos by horus8	15-Jan-03/9:38 AM
1)Ashton Kirchner is that idiot from that seventies show, and the movie dude where's my car. 2)Michael Bulgakov, 'was' a famous russian writer and scholar. 3) kind of, i just wanted to show you my new angel defeatherer.
Re: a comment on Fuckface by poemwanker	14-Jan-03/5:15 PM
that's funny.
Re: Hidden by tbeach84	14-Jan-03/5:07 PM
soul banging is always a delightful past time activity..that, and cannulas. lol. ah the turmoil of asexuala. facinating...like learning how to play the tuba in a marching band.