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Gemini (Free verse) by susie I was born a Gemini
And I know my evil "twin"
She's sly and self protective
She's underneath my skin
Though I prefer myself to her
She does not let me choose
She emerges from my consciousness
A dangerous young muse
She creeps along beside me
Refusing to be shaken
She knows that love's a risk
And that risks are not worth taking
She'll sacrifice her body
To protect her heart
And when truth comes up empty
She knows just where to start
I'm keeping her at bay for now
But I will never know
When it is she'll next arrive
Or which way she will go.
Up the ladder:
George and Samson
Down the ladder:
The Blooding
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Posted: September 29, 2002 3:32 AM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2002 3:32 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.2331157 Overall Rank: 942 Comments:
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29-Sep-02/3:38 AM
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hehe I liked this, perhaps because I'm a Gemini too. I definitely have an evil twin too ( :
This is good, the discussion of differing parts of one's own mind. Not sure about rhyming shaken and taking, though, but I like the idea of sacrificing the body to save the heart.
i liked this alot,i'm a gemini too,but there's a true feeling besides it' s a creative idea to write about
My mom was a Gem. An alcoholic too.
This makes me smile and scares the bejeeezus out of me too. Kudos.8
Great poem I love it, 9 for you girl!!
wonderfull.... i like the rythm...
and i love the content... i'm a gemini by the way, so i know what u mean... but i have not yet realized which of the twins is the evil one....
Or the way that she could go.
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